tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post4814281438179093428..comments2023-11-02T10:00:42.771+00:00Comments on purplesimon: Can Of Wormspurplesimehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03771575082601101197noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-81197645414160368532008-12-10T16:58:00.000+00:002008-12-10T16:58:00.000+00:00Wow, that was really great! I was completely pulle...Wow, that was really great! I was completely pulled into it.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08056024843793619110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-79187770255120602992008-12-10T15:39:00.000+00:002008-12-10T15:39:00.000+00:00I like the changes. :) Good writing! I identify...I like the changes. :) Good writing! I identify with the protag here somewhat and the sense of loneliness, pain, isolation is what really gets to me. Again, kudos!KarmaLennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05412222023558882048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-43706153106778770612008-12-10T11:28:00.000+00:002008-12-10T11:28:00.000+00:00This morning (10 December) I added another paragra...This morning (10 December) I added another paragraph to ensure earlier parts made more sense.<BR/><BR/>There are also some subtle changes to punctuation, sense and language, but nothing major.<BR/><BR/>Just thought anyone reading this might like to know :)<BR/><BR/>purplesimon out...purplesimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03771575082601101197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-59646485198687748352008-12-10T11:08:00.000+00:002008-12-10T11:08:00.000+00:00Thanks KarmaLennon for your kind words. There are ...Thanks KarmaLennon for your kind words. There are a few errors that need sorting in terms of continuity and so on, but nothing that can't be fixed.<BR/><BR/>purplesimon out...purplesimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03771575082601101197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-37793001548479197782008-12-09T14:41:00.000+00:002008-12-09T14:41:00.000+00:00Wow. I think I'm floored. That's pretty much all...Wow. I think I'm floored. That's pretty much all I can come up with at the moment (lame I know) but words escape me. I think I really love this story.KarmaLennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05412222023558882048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9113895.post-49042534168986921672008-12-05T14:38:00.000+00:002008-12-05T14:38:00.000+00:00It still requires a lot of tidying up, which I wil...It still requires a lot of tidying up, which I will do shortly. I probably won't post another draft, so this is it for here.<BR/><BR/>purplesimon out...purplesimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03771575082601101197noreply@blogger.com